There is a beast in Aiden’s house. Its
presence arouses fear in his family. From his room, Aiden hears the shrieks and
screams as they try to make their escape. The heat in the room is incredible.
Through his open door, Aiden sees the creature burn its path up the stairs. They
cannot escape it. It is a beast of smoke and flame. It roars at its prey, and
flashes its mane of black and red. Yet despite the intensity, a chill runs
through Aiden as he recalls the day.
It had been quite a while since he had
seen his street. The brisk winter day was icy on his bare arms. Aiden had
hitched a ride back home in the bed of a truck that contained only a
weed-eater, a red plastic gas can, and himself. Night was in full effect when
the truck pulled onto his suburban street. Aiden signaled the driver where to
stop, and then walked up to his house.
The windows were all darkened; his family
must have fallen asleep hours ago, ready to wake early for presents. What a surprise
his parents had in store for them when they would wake to find that he had
returned! He plucked the key from above the door jam and stepped inside. The
lights from the Christmas tree twinkled bright in the darkness of the house.
Aiden stepped around the presents placed
under the tree. None for him, of course. Who would’ve expected him back, after
all? He made his way up the stairs and listened at his parents’ door. The soft
snores proved their slumber. Aiden continued toward his sister’s room. Sweet
Emily. He missed her most, and would always miss her most. He placed a hand on
her door, and kissed the hand. A tear fell to the floor with a splash as Aiden
stepped away. His trail marked, he descended the stairs to his room.
The memories fade away as Aiden traces his
sight through the black smoke filling his old home. The beast had already done
damage. The tree blazes brighter than before and the presents beneath it add to
the ember glow. Sweat drips down Aiden’s brow as he looks around. His life is
burning around him. The beast rakes its burning claws across the walls and the
symbols of his youth—his posters, paintings, photographs—they burn in the
beast’s rage. Having seen enough, Aiden makes to leave, but comes face-to-face
with the beast, itself, blocking his exit.
The shadow monster became, in Aiden’s
mind, his father from the year before. He remembered the way he had stood
there, quaking in fear, as his dad yelled at him in the door’s frame. His
mother watched, from behind, and his sister, sweet Emily, had been crying at
his father to leave Aiden alone. The cat had been cold, Aiden argued. It was
freezing! But his father rejected his argument. The cat had perished because of
Aiden, true, but he was only trying to help. He reasoned that fire warmed the
family, and therefore fire would warm the cat. But his father was greedy, and
punished him for trying to share the family’s warmth. By his father’s rule,
only the family could live. And since he tried to break the rule, they sent Aiden
away.
And now he is back, but the beast had
followed him. Its fiery feline eyes gaze at him as it creeps forward. Aiden
stays still and calm as it brushes against his leg. The beast reaches up and
licks Aiden’s left hand, scorching skin and bone. There was no pain greater though
than the pain from his father’s betrayal. So Aiden stands with his beast,
satisfied in revenge. The white gown from the ward burns fast on his body until
it catches fire to the red gas can still in Aiden’s right hand.
One of my middle school Advanced Lang.Arts teachers gave us this passage to read. Then we had to explain what we thought The Beast was and why by giving quotes from the story. This is was a very good piece of literature.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I'm really glad that some of my work was able to make it into a part of classroom instruction.
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